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my halo by ~TenebranAngelis:iconTenebranAngelis:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




through your desperation.
sweet taintless lips.
submerging in vibes, i知 feeling a little crushed.
lips caress about that serene flesh.
I知 feeling a little impure.
with these wings smeared.
the heat in my breath.
flames dance in the dream.
don't let me no what i feel is real.
i can't feel my face.
take me out of the furnace.
the tea tastes so bitter,
but sin smells so sweet.
cradle me to a place
where i can forever sleep.
craving this masterpiece.
death holds me no embrace.
the desire is so overwhelming.
what could i do but fall.
drown me silently.
kiss my eyelids goodnight.
these eyes are so overexposed.
this spinning is so out of control.
i am without control.
fragments of broken dreams.

i have to taste you one more time.
©2003-2009 ~TenebranAngelis
:icontenebranangelis:

Author's Comments

Through my thronfull laybrinth, i somehow find myself faced with fear. Im without hope. Hope for humanity. Hope for these emotions i don't wish to feel.


Picture by Chad Michael Ward

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~aesiraven Nov 22, 2003, 5:11:57 PM
that is really sweet. almost sad, but more sweet than sad.

I'm sorry, I'm not very good at commenting on poetry ^^;

--
Final Fantasy VI imparts upon us this valuable gem of wisdom:

When life hands you lemons, POISON THE WATER SUPPLY.
:iconadonis:
~adonis Nov 23, 2003, 3:50:19 AM
gawsh! I'm always struck with awe everytime i read your writing. :tears:

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Silent Sea + Screaming Ground
Silver Sky To Fly
Emerald Sea + Sardius Ground
Jasper Sky To Bleed
And Fall Down As Sweet Rain

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~TenebranAngelis Nov 23, 2003, 9:29:51 AM
:aww: thankyou adonis. :hug:

--
If i'm an angel,
paint me with black wings.

x my stock [link]
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~fannodoubt Nov 23, 2003, 8:27:50 PM
sort of a surreal taste to it. I like it.
:iconchainsaw-jky:
~chainsaw-jky Nov 28, 2003, 2:43:42 PM
the images in this shoot through my mind as a syringe to the head. excellent work, i could feel this one. this would make perfect lyrics for a doom or melodic black metal song.

by the way, i'm devwatching you. your stock led me here, i'm glad i stumbled across it

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Numbed by excess and complete saturation... Scarred influence by degeneration
Lost innocence and blank revelations...Searching for hope in static transmissions
- Fear Factory
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~rockisdeaddclxvi Nov 29, 2003, 11:20:22 AM
beautifully written...powerful...
dw

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"We all have the access to shovels, but that doesn’t make us all gravediggers. " marilyn manson
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~caffeinegoddess Jan 20, 2004, 10:55:02 PM
Adoration:
"...sin smells so sweet..."
"...kiss my eyelids goodnight.
these eyes are so overexposed..."

I really do Adore the writing as much as I do the piece of art.. which is very romanticist to me. the colors mostly, and the blurry ness.. the colors are dreamy yet muted. Of course the overlayed texture is wonderful. :coffeecup: :+favlove:

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<3 Mara
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