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fear of feelings.
of being loved.
i bend to daylight that brings no hope.
within I’m hopeless.
hopeless without the hoping.
cause i don't belong to a world such as this.
a world that isn’t real.
through the distance.
the savage garden.

you're wings on fire.
you've never flown.
i've never seen them.
now where are mine.


i belong to a atmosphere,
where i wait to stop the rain.
years unpassing.
seas uncalming.
i've yield to a sin of impure beauty.
to be given a halo, i haven’t earned.
i've been crowned.
and the flowers weep.
I’m chasing droplets of light.
dancing without color.

things look so higher.
how were you going get me there.
my wings are tired.
how will i set myself free.


open the door.
you've toke me in eternity.
i don't want it.
i don't want forever.
don't devour me.
don’t call me impure.
you can longer soar.
you’ve fallen.
and i’ve fallen.
for my heaven is as black as yours.

laying on the shores of time.
my only comfort, is at his altar.
i’m smeared in ashes.
this beauty you cant compare.

you cannot find them.
you never had them.
here is where you lost them.
i’m chasing angels.
©2003-2009 ~TenebranAngelis
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that i taste.




Picture by Chad Michael Ward.

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:icondigipixi:
"i’m chasing angels" ..I love that line.

Somn great imagery in here, very evocative, well done :)

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:icontenebranangelis:
thankyou.

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:icongreeneggsandham:
This is a lovely piece...I'm not sure why this hasn't received more comments, it's certainly worthy of them. Your technique is good, I would just be careful of some of the punctuation, because it almost disrupts the smoothness of it in places if the reader has to think " shouldn't that have a so-and-so there?"
This bit was lovely:
I’m chasing droplets of light.
dancing without color.

Overall, well done...I'll be watching

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:iconkeevy39:
thats a rewally awesome pic , di you use photoshop?

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:icongypsykaine:
Mmmm, I like this poem alot, as it was said early great imagery, and excellent wording.

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:iconbookofshadows0:
Wow, great poem... and Image...

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:icondarkina:
Amazing...+Fave

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:iconfanatical-kitty:
awesome writing; nice image. great work all round.
:iconschwarzes-meer:
beautiful

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